Maria Thermann Author

London

Author of children's & YA fiction, copywriter & editor. Sarah Chipperfield created illustration for Wanderlust entry

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Princess Charming

And a very charming story it is! Cannot wait for the next chapter of this girl-power take on the traditional prince meets princess in a tower, slays dragon and rides into the sunset with her. Muffin the Dragon, priceless! Well done and don't keep us in suspense for too long. Next chapter, please!

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The Hatchling

It's a very amusing story that needs a little more flesh on the hatchling's bones. Light, temperature, sounds, descriptions of protagonists, home, surroundings, all those things draw the reader deeper into a story. The ending seems a bit of an anti-climax, could do with a twist or surprise ending...unless this is still work in progress? Having said all that, I really enjoyed reading the story, especially the dynamic between the two main characters, and it has great potential, as has its writer:)

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