Maria McLeed

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Definitely Recommending!

I love the story. And I can't wait for new updates.
I find it a little hard to read at times, because of the author's tendency for run-on sentences. Also sometimes the genders are accidentally swapped. Names are mixed up. Grammer and spelling even in the edited chapters could use some work.
Even so, I love the story. Definitely recommend it.

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Colored Impressed

It was a surprising combo of fantasy and reality and that combined with the poetic style shocked me. Just wow! You even used a few lesser known words to add dynamics to the story. Good job! Keep it up! I don't know a lot about that writing style, but it's hard for me to understand it at times. Your feelings, however, came across really well. I'm impressed.

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Hats Off to the Author!!

This story kept me up all night. The plot was beautiful. I cried and laughed and I wanted to reach in and shake those boys at times. Very few stories can cover so many painful subjects so well and yet resolve them. My hat is off to the author. Thank you for this story.

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