Marisa Noelle

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interesting

This is an interesting and unique story. I like the alternating point of views where we get to know both of the main characters. This is an important story that sheds a light on the sex slave industry and human trafficking.

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fascinating

Whilst this kind of high-concept fantasy isn't my go-to genre, there was a lot to be enjoyed from this story. The writing was beautiful with some excellent and unique descriptions (Drawing new music like a sigh...beautiful!) . The idea of telepathy is always interesting and this story also reminded me of Stephanie Meyer's The Host. The concept is original and the characterisation and point of view cast iron. Well done.

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really enjoyed this. Characterisation spot on and well developed. Easy flow of writing that is easy to get lost in. And so believable. Such a do-gooder but you like her anyway!

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