Marissa Leavitt

First time writing. I am a little out of my depth

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The Alphas Usurper

Alpha Nick finally finds his mate and brings her home. After only a month of her being his Luna, his position is being threatened. Will he be able to capture these usurpers? Or will they claim the ...

Fantasy / Other by Marissa Leavitt • Ongoing • 3 chapters

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I like the idea of the story and it feels like it could be a best seller, however some words could be placed in different spots and the plot of the story could be annunciation a little better. There are also a few spelling errors but other than that I am intrigued

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