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Alejandro

Impressed with your grammar. The story is unique. I as a Latina appreciate you throwing that in there. It's a nice change of pace. Please update soon.

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The six- a reverse harem story

Awesome story line. A romance, a thriller and erotic plot all in one. Please update soon

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Fire and Ashes

So hot. I think I need a cold shower. Alexander is a complicated, but hot hero. Also I think he is a nice guy

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My Master

I'm so intrigued with the Master's personality. Is he a nice guy or a monster. Does he understands what he does is wrong or was he just raised that way? I'm dying to read the next chapter

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My Twin Masters

Please update soon. I would like to read more than one chapter at a time. The story is really intriguing but I forget what's going on when the updates are so little and so far in-between.

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Lash

OMG so sexy and intriguing

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Please show me

WOW!WOW! HOT! WRITE ANOTHER ONE PLEASE!

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The Twins

Awesome story, please update soon!!!!!

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Katie a love story

I would like to see the story expand to Adam and Laura. Their wedding and baby 😍

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Softer Sin

Please please don't listen to ignorant people. You ARE the author. Your imagination is the one that gave us such an incredible story. I apologise that some people are so idiotic that they think they can tell you how to write. If they want to make up a story they should write their own. But there probably not that talented. You are a great writer, please continue your excellent story writing. This book was well written and the plot is excellent. I hope to read other stories by you!

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Sinful Angel

Such a good story!!!!!!!!! I love happy ending

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Tomboy and Top Dog

OH Please update your story, it is getting really good. I want to know what happens next.

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Just Friends

I love the plot, but you need to expand the story after Lilly tells Aaron that she's breaking up with him. It's very shortened and generalized, it doesn't have any detail or explanation about their litor life choices. I think you are a much better author than just leaving it so vague. I hope you don't get offended by my comments.

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Ride A Cowboy

Very good reading

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Twice Forbidden

Good book. So sad Justin died though. I thought for sure when Ivy went to see him, he'd wake up

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His Temptation

OMG I love love love 😍 this book. It kept me on edge the whole time I was reading it. Very well written, good plot, awesome writing style and the characters were so believable. You are a awesome author 👍. I can't wait to start reading, His Decision.

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The Last Door

A little dark for my taste, but a thorough and different exploration of the darker side of sex. Interesting

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Seduce and Destroy

Awesome! I hope you update SOON! I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. I love that the woman is the assassin and it's okay with the man. That he's comfortable with her being so dominate and smart and lethal and has her own company. I really like the story.

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Lust Shackles

Very well written, extremely captivating. I can't stop reading this and I'm dying for an update. Please update the story soon

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Caught in between

Wow this story is so hot. I wonder though if Catalina will get hurt, by the competition. The guys that want to take over the guys business. I hope not

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Broken Pieces

Really good start to what seems to be a good really great story 👍

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Twin Tormentors

I think the twins aren't human, their PIGS! But how funny what turns women on. We have all had fantasies of being possessed by a man

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Running to you

OMG this book is better than the first one! When is the 3rd one coming going to continue? I'm waiting on pins and needles to get on to book 3 of this story. Please update the newest book. This one of the best stories I've read.

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Submitting to the alpha

Well written. I'm so waiting for next chapter. Please update!

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TouchNode

I love the plot, I love that the heroine saves herself. I get kinda confused which guy your writing about sometimes, but that's ok. Its a great story.

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ASubs Life

Good writing, I love the story, the sex was astounding. Carolina is kinda bratty but then again so am I. Women that feel insecure usually do that. Can't wait for the update

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The Playboy Heir

Great book 👍 such a beautiful storybook love story

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Royal Arrangement

Well written, I like that they have a BDSM relationship and a loving marriage. This is what a grown up relationship is like, with all it's worries, doubts and love.

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Irish Angel

Great love story!

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Pleasing the Bossl

This book is so hot! It's got me blushing and hoping you update SOON!!! Please don't keep us waiting too long.

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Two Mr kings

Hot hot hot. OMG this is getting so good. Please update soon

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Battered Slave

I really like this book. I have to say you have captured the true feelings I believe women have all their lives. The love/hate that we all have for our husbands or longtime lovers. Kudos miss for having captured the duality of a long term relationship.

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The Affair

Such a beautiful love story, but also such a good story about one human helping another out of the depression and despair that accompanies a dysfunctional marriage. Good job, in capturing the list and love that a great marriage can bring. And the work you have to put into it. Your very good at description of feelings, it was truly well describe. I can't wait to read the two books that follow.

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Three of a kind

Are you ever going to update this novel? It has been a long time. I was really hoping you would be able to get to it soon. I want to know what happens next.

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