At the very beginning with the mole - and then the nail, I could feel part of my skin crawl. Overall a very good story and extremely interesting. I enjoyed the way you ended it - it was low tune but very personal.
The beginning of the story had some odd/awkward 'switches' in the middle of paragraphs (at least to me) which is the only reason I didn't give 5/5. Other than that - excellent execution.
Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed your story!
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