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current wip • frosted heart

drinker of tea. intp. also on wattpad.

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saw your wall post and decided to help a fellow writer out !!!

I'm still in the process of reading your story, but I might come back and edit this if anything changes! just wanted to give you my first impressions :)

so far, your premise seems to be pretty solid and eva's turning out as a strong female character, and all her strategies + intel on other students are laid out nicely. however, i feel like some parts of your narration of eva's observations were kind of long and could be condensed/simplified but still get all the details out to the reader.

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I was gonna wait till this was completed to write this...

bUT I changed my mind and decided it's never too early to show some appreciation and love uwu!
as much as I don't normally go for these types of storylines, I feel like I actually don't know which ships are going to be endgame and I can't wait to see where this is going!

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