Maureen O'Connor Hess

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Raw and Emotional

The author has expressed a wide variety of emotions and clearly shows how the relationship has changed. Feeling of disillusionment and hurt would accurately describle the author's feelings at the end of the relationship and the reader clearly can tell how devastated and angry the author is by the treatment by the other person

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Cool fantasy

Fantasy stories are not usually anything I would read but the story was good and kept my interest. The writing style is great, adding humor and sarcasm to this story. You can feel the emotions of the characters.

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Want more chapters!

Intrigued to find out how the plot ties back to the first chapter teaser. I liked the author's writing style, kept my interest. Definitely looking forward to reading more chapters to see how the characters are expanded and how the story unfolds and explains what was written in chapter 1

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