mawthrawn

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Why No More?

I know this is written for the Con Man contest, but your story could go much further given how it is abruptly ended as a teaser. Your skill definitely shows in your descriptions of the atmosphere and mood of the story and the emotions of the characters. Well done, indeed.

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Fun Day with Wray

A really good premise with Wray and Alan's work in the Rogue One series. A fun read overall. A shame the rest of the cast didn't have more screen time, Dawn and Stutter especially. You should've had more reaction with them after Wray's announcement to kill off his character.

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Nice Story Laced with Bad Screenwriting Mistakes

You have a good idea with your work, however, it is laced with lots of mistakes from a beginning screenwriter (which would only be a problem if you were going to sell this script or enter it into a screenwriting contest). I think this would work better, and be easier to read due to how this site formats pre-work uploads, in a story format.

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Oh, my...

I could feel Wray being very uncomfortable with this production, especially with zinger of him and Takei playing lovers (or was there more innuendo being let on). I wonder how the fans would react to this situation? Will they/won't they accept? Who knows.

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Nice story with a nicer twist

This sounds almost like a dream Wray would have at a convention, then become a full blown nightmare when he discovers the truth. I think the date should have had more detail and maybe you could have an incident with Wray and a fan after he signs Angel's bill.

As a quick read it is very good.

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