May Saleh

Damascus, Syria

Rock n' Roll | Metalhead โ€” Mystery, Murder & Makeup! โ€” WATTPAD: @maybell-berry

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This needs to be published.

As I have expected, it's a 5 out of 5. There's not a single thing I would want to point out in this masterpiece! It's been a while since I've been following Julia and Vladimir throughout their journey, and I am absolutely in love with it!
I love it, Jacky! I ran our of words to describe your art. And I hope you would be able to provide us with more works of yours, and I'll be the first supporter for each.

Happy writing, and I hope you can achieve that dream.

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Beyond what I'm capable of describing!

It was very difficult not to give everything a 5 star; I was afraid that it might come off as "kissing ass", but I don't really care, I love it, and I'll give it a 5 because it certainly deserves it. You deserve it, Jacky. I am so in love with this book and I can't wait to start with the second one! I'm so stoked for what you have coming for us! And I absolutely adore what you did in the end; how the Count discovered his true feelings, how it's possible for anyone and anything to feel a beautiful emotion like love. After all, everything revolves around love.. loving something, someone.

I love it. And I'm so glad that you reached out to me and introduced me to this work of art.

I'm here to support you, on every step on becoming a professional writer, and I'm so proud of being "that person" you once reached out to, and introduced her to your book. Stay strong, and keep going cause it's worth it.

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Thrilling!

Since there isn't much to judge this piece by, I will give it a 5.0 stars to help you get started! Because i certainly have high hope's for this one, and i love your ability to hook anyone coming across your work. I hope you continue and thrive!

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Soul-touching

Oh my God.
Haley, I can't stress this enough. I'm fucking crying right now. I can't possibly imagine what you went through, in order for you to conjure up this masterpiece of words on digital pages. I know this might sound fucked up, but did you... by any chance... go through something similar, that you described and painted this vivid picture of the emotional rollercoaster Leslie King was going through?
Haley, sweetheart, you are truly a talented, precious gem of a human being to be known by this goddamn world; because you should be out there, with those legendary writers who people look up to and respect. You are a writing sensation. Can't wait for the 3rd installment.

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SPLENDID!!

I mean what is there to say? This novel is outstanding from Chapter One until this final Chapter! I cannot wait to start the second book. Your writing style, the way you laid out the events of the story -- your story telling ability!! I can never stress this enough: you are easily one of the best writers I've come across in my time of reading. And let me tell you, these writers I'm referring to are only two, and you are the third now! ๐Ÿ–ค

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Amazing!

Honestly, it was hard not to give this book 5 stars. I loved the theories of the supernatural; the spiritual energy and all. I'm definitely impressed by the plot and the well put together chain of events. I love your writing style, and love Alison's personality traits. I'm looking forward to starting the other book. Good job, honey!

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