Jimmy McCann

@mccann

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Rushed

The author doesn't spend much time in a setting or on a scene before moving on to the next one. The cause of the Earth's demise is baffling, and the constrictive society on the new world is set up just to be knocked down by the protagonist. I was beginning to think that the point of the story (the reason why it was written) was to see 21st century artifacts from the perspective of someone from a new primitive society— a kind of future-past, where the things of our world are seen as futuristic— but then it becomes an adventure story about trying to escape goo. It isn't finished.

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