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only WIP: [ All I have to say ] for my lovely ppl - @lost_writer2006 @bookworm_1234 @sreyapb💖 find me on Wattpad too! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

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Amazing book series! (Courting Death❤️💖💞)

I love this last book of the series and cannot help but marvel at your beautiful descriptions. Your writing has been absolutely fascinating- no words can express my love for your works. Everything was so well written, well thought and well put together💗✨✨

Scenes were so vividly portrayed and characters were simply stunning. Overall, your work has been intriguing, thrilling & captivating. Your words sure know how to pull me in and evoke strong emotions! Am loving all of the series and would recommend them to everyone any day. (your books are simply first-class!)

Keep up the excellent job 👍 and will support you in your writing journey!😘😊

💌 xoxo,
Megan✦・゚

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You & I (An absolute masterpiece!✨✨)

This story is so perfect, you don't even know it. I read it all really quickly since the chapters were really short. This book is one of a kind. It's something I often wanted to write because its so similar to my own experience. But I haven't written it yet and you, in a way, wrote it for me.

Many events that happened- the unspoken love, the eye-contact, the quiet feeling - it all happened to me and it ended with Him leaving too, at graduation. I think this book really motivated me to write a book about us. (Me and Him) Most of your words used hit me spot-on and I'm really happy to have found a book like this. Absolutely beautiful.

I love your writing style so much and the story was meant to be short, without dialogues. It was good that way. Thank you so much for this! 100% I really enjoyed and love your story. I love the way you portray the character's feelings and thoughts. Without words. That was really really amazing and brilliantly done.
Also, I feel like the ending is really meant to be- kind of unfinished and unsaid. I feel like sometimes, things are just the way it is.

Sometimes, there may not be the perfect ending. It was sad though to end that way. I could truly relate to almost everything you wrote and I could get the chapters easily and interpret them. The feelings were just so raw too. Overall, this book is an absolute perfection! Simply stunning and deserves more recognition! Keep up the excellent work author.

❝𝐲𝐨𝐮'𝐫𝐞 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐠𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬. 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞'𝐬 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐠𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐚𝐧 '𝐮𝐬', 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐢 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐰𝐚𝐲.❞

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Iridian

Beautiful descriptions and a very exciting and thrilling plot, rooting for Rachel and hope that her mate would be the Game Master somehow! Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for keeping me on my toes XD and just wish the paragraphs can be cut shorter so that it isn't so lengthy or hard to read. Otherwise, a terribly captivating and hooking book to read filled with twists and turns and quite different from normal werewolf books- I just love the game, it reminds me of 'Hunger Games' by Suzanne Collins and 'The Forbidden Game' by LJ Smith

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Simply first-rate!

Each chapter was so beautifully described and portrayed. Emotions and thoughts were vividly expressed. Simply beautiful and heartfelt. No words needed💖💖💖 There isn't a love or a relationship that is smooth-sailing honestly. Each is bound to have ups and downs, experiencing pain, loss and a past. Well for me, this book was simply heartbreaking and saddening but yet at the same moment, the ending was perfect. I was able to find some solace in the ending. This book was so well-written, I give it up to the author. I loved every single chapter. It was written with such heart. I could just feel it- all the various emotions.
(p.s. I read the whole book on Wattpad) The author's works are all stunning and exceptionally well-written. Do support her if you ever have the chance to. You won't be disappointed ((:

Xx, M.

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His Only Beloved

This is the 2nd time I'm reviewing this book -with my other account. I really love this book <3 I love the suspense and simply can't wait for book 2! I'm also a great fan of the author's work and this was the second book I ever read on Inkitt🖤💖 I always love how the writer builds up the emotions and leaves me feeling a lot. It was a great journey with Rose and Lorenzo and all the other characters, now I'm eagerly awaiting book 2!!
xx. M.

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The Unborn Joel

Hey Kookie!
first of all, I wanna thank you for reviewing my book <3

Ok, I'll be honest with you...
Overall, I feel that your whole idea was interesting, and quite a different concept from what I usually read. I must say that I rarely read horror books, and this was not really scary at all. The writing style isn't really my type based on my preference of writing. I also noticed you changed the tense quite a bit. I recommend you stick to one tense and I think you should show and not tell.

For instance. for this part in chapter 2: "When Caroline looked at the clock, she was shocked! "
instead of that, you can say: "when Caroline glanced at the clock, her jaw dropped" to show that she was shocked, instead of merely telling the reader her feeling. So, you can write something like that, I hope it helps (:

To add on, the story was slightly confusing due to the changing of POVs and the lack of cohesiveness and flow of the whole story, so I personally found it hard to relate or like the characters.

However, I think this book is not bad and I know you'll improve.
All the best in your writing journey, I'm looking forward to new works from you :D

xx, M

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Loveless Lover

I think the meaning of the book itself is already meaningful, put with beautiful words strung together. This book consists of poems which express a lot. So much can be felt and you really have the author to thank for. This book is simply a masterpiece and I really like her poems. Looking forward to the next update and also can't wait to start on Traum Junge! ((:❤😘🤗🤗🤗✨✨
xx, M.

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A legacy for Katherine

I must say I really did enjoy the early chapters and have been hooked to this book till about chapter 60. I did like Elias and Katherine together (: But the later chapters had me lose interest, though good job in having me read at least 3/4 of your book!

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Leon's Queen

Mostly, I enjoyed the part where she fled from Leon, idk why (: both of them are quite okay together~

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Flawless

I'm glad she didn't end up with Callum or Jason typically and that she found herself- a stronger version of her previous and current self. I think forgiveness and growing up is the key here and I'm glad that was being expressed :D

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So Relatable

This poem is beautifully expressed✨ and relatable enough to feel the emotions and thoughts the author feels. Brilliant! <3

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I can't be myself

A meaningful piece of work, with various thoughts expressed well.
You can feel the emotions- deep and raw.
Beautifully written.
You can feel what the author wants to say,
deep down.
Her words speak truth and honesty.
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Am rooting for you girl!!
Always stay strong~
Loads of love for you
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(p.s. can't wait for more of your poems!! Keep writing!! x)
xx,
Megan

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Fayre

I absolutely loved the starting (the school part) when there was more tension and intense feelings towards each other. I often enjoy the starting more to when they get together. Overall, I like them together ♥

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A cool and simple story (:

It was simple, sweet, and nice <3 cool idea here! x

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Walls around us

This poetry book is by far one of the most meaningful to read.
The advice is really good and I love your style of writing!
Beautiful overall (:
Keep writing and don't stop! x

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Agent 13

Impressive work here. I really like and admire strong girls like Thirteen. The book was quite well-written, simply intense and exciting. This is why I love action books and the agent kind of books. Great job here author! I love the whole team too- Cody, Devin, (who is simply HILARIOUS and "dumb"), Chase and Jason.

Also, love the arguments which actually helps them grow closer as a team(: Overall, cool book you have here! Love the fighting scenes and the sarcastic retorts, simply entertaining as I read! ? and Thirteen and Cody. I like Jackson and Zack with Thirteen as well. Well, I love all of them together (TEAM DELTA 2) I really feel so terribly fond of them, like they seriously all grew on me - a lot. Btw, I want Cody to get together with Thirteen so bad and NOT someone else ugh >:( I forever ship Cody and 13. PERIOD. His agent no. is not even there on the book cover! :((( 😭😭

Anyways, agent books are all about teamwork. you really need team members to go through the ups and downs together, to bond and forge relationships and agents stories usually end up sadly because they have to risk their lives, they undergo so much and lose people in the process, new characters are also introduced and the older cast sometimes then to fade - like Cody and for that I'm very annoyed and pissed that they don't end up together. I feel like Cody should be with 13, but its not my story to tell, but anyways, I'll always want that. I love Delta 2 - all 5 of them originally [ Cody, 13, Devin, Chase, Jason ]

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Cool, unexpected story

I was not THAT surprised about the ending because I happened to read a review of someone for this book and it had a small spoiler

.For me, there wasn't much romance to this whole book. I love the author's writing style and I'm feeling really sad about the ending. I wish it wasn't so, but its after all the author's story to tell. The plot was intriguing I admit (:

I kind of wish Dante didn't do that to Sasha, and actually wish they were together and not end so tragically :((

There were several grammatical errors and the paras were sometimes a little too long at one go, so if you could shorten it into diff paras, it'd be much easier to read.

Yeah, to add on, I love your descriptions, very vividly portrayed~

Overall, it was an interesting book to read! It was a refreshing plot twist ^^ Good job author! Keep writing! x

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Cutest story ever :3

I loved Daisy with Seth- they are too cute together. I admit Seth's too possessive and Daisy can be too timid but they go well together. Absolutely love this book and I wish you'd update but anyways, this is a good book! 🤗🤗🤗🥺🥺🥺 The cuteness really melts my heart✨💕✨💕

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The perfect book for writers

This is such a useful and helpful book- with all the advice writers need. I think you addressed all the points really well! Amazing job and this was really of great help to me! There was so much to learn and improve on! Thank you so much for putting up this book! (:

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Five Words

There's a lot I want to say (: First of all, I never expected to start reading your book so soon since I was supposed to be really busy, but your book was enough to pull me in. I actually liked Ace but I really really found him frustrating - in a way, I felt like pulling at my hair xD The way he infuriates Cher, has the same effect on me too. Cher, well, she's relatable and too good - and I mean that in the best way possible! I totally get how she can fall for Ace.
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So, I continued to read on and decided to rate this 3/5- I think I really enjoyed the start (the 1st few chps) best. I preferred Ace when he was more cold towards Cher haha. Pls don't take offense. I did love your earlier parts!

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The Words She Didn't Say

Short and sweet. Simply written yet beautiful as it is~ Great job Author (:

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Alluring...✦

Beautifully written.
Fine and lovely characters.
Cool, intriguing and captivating plot.
Amazing descriptors and style of writing.
Overall, brilliant work of the author's - keep it up!!
100% recommending this book to everyone :D
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I can feel this sense of quietness between the two characters: Violet Harper and Maddox Haster. This book kind of reminds me of 'Pretty Girls' or 'Bad Girls' I like both characters' interactions with each other and personally enjoyed those moments best. It feels like they are both in their own world, existing as the two of them only...well in fact, two runaways ;) in the snow, which is simply beautiful and nice to read xD I must say I can't wait for the next update and looking forward to seeing how the rest of the book turns out. Honestly, I love the author's books, they are really really highly recommended and something one can't miss!~ Pls update soon! xx

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My 1st book on Inkitt!!🤗🤗🤗

A lovely book, and one that led me to Inkitt where I met such amazing friends, readers and authors likewise...read it in sept 2020, my very first book and it was GOOD!!!! :P I always couldn't review it b4 but now I'm sooooooo HAPPY I can!!! Brilliant job author!! I love Justin best!! :D💕💕💕

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