Y/A fantasy is not my typical genre but Hleo sounded interesting. I must say, that I was pulled in right away and thoroughly enjoyed this story. The typical high school girl-boy relationships, jealousies,etc. were very realistic based on my own children, nieces, nephews and students. Well developed characters and plot.
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I wondered about Hannah's father, however. Once he left for England, there seemed to be no contact between him and Hannah. His assistant was from the dark side which left me wondering if he was in danger.
Do I sense a sequel coming up? As a mystery writer, I ask many questions. I would definitely be interested in reading a sequel to Hleo.
One minor suggestion I would make is to proofread again for typos and space gaps that are typical in e-book formatting.