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Incredible!

Wow, this is a really great story! I love the way you've built Adelaide's character so quickly, she feels very real and vulnerable, and her relationship with Evander is done expertly as well. Your writing and dialogue are believable and honestly so is Adelaide, she's very like a friend of mine. Even her getting so close to Eros so suddenly is in character. I thought that she would maybe be more cautious because of her past, but I understand how someone finally asking about her life would cause her to drop her guard. I've added this to my reading list and I'm very excited for new chapters!

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