True Romance
Not my typical fare at all. But I think for fans of Romance it does the trick perfectly. A slow burn with relatable characters and a satisfying conclusion. It can be a challenge writing from the perspective of the opposite sex, and though I often questioned his parts, it worked. Well written, great writing skills. The story had a very smooth flow to it. Well done!
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Not particularly my cuppa, but I can see the appeal, especially for women. My impressions after reading the first half of it. I enjoyed the preludes to the encounters, they were perfect setups. Her character descriptions were excellent. It's harder than you might think not to use the same words to describe people. There's only so many. I gave the story and plot only 4 stars because the spiciness in most of them were pretty similar. Slightly dominant perfect male meets and then ravishes stunning female in a slightly rough encounter. I felt considering the dominant nature of the males, a lot more should've happened. But I can certainly see the popular trope it fits. And if that's what you're looking for that's exactly what you'll get. 4 stars for technical writing. The author switches character perspectives throughout her stories. And every time she did, it took me out of the moment. Making seamless transitions between characters in a short story is a difficult task at best. I would actually suggest switching perspectives more often might do the trick there, as you'd only switch to a different character a few times each story. It could be that's what threw me. All in all, if you're fans of that type of encounter you'll love it.
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