Michelle Torlot

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Literally couldn't put this down

This was amazing so well written. It sucked me in and I just wanted to read more. Half the time I loved mr bossy half the time I hated him. Hope there is another installment the characters were so believable

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Onyx

This book was amazing. The characters and the plot. Loved the sassy Avaluna. loved her sense of humour. Now reading book 2. Story is so gripping. I love and Loath Onyx in equal measures

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Very engaging

I came upon this story by accident. The chapter count put me off slightly, but I decided to give it a go. I wasnt disappointed. The two main characters are brilliantly written. I started reading this and at 3 am in the morning I decided I should put it down and continue another time. I'm loving the ups and downs of the story. The author could possibly have split it into two books, but the chapters arent two long so I found myself half way through relatively quickly.

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Amazing book

I read this in one dayijustcouldnt put it down. The characters felt so real. I felt more sorry for Zacharias than I did for Edie. The ending (no spoilers) was a real tear jerked although kind of guessed how it was going to end. Still loved it though and loved the crossover. Started reading Simone and Nathaniels story before this one. Hope it gets completed

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Brilliant

Loved this from start to finish. Pacing was really good and the plot and characters sucked me in

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