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A nice story told in the eyes of a child

It's a well-written story. The story told in the child's perspective gives it a splash of innocence and curiosity in the animal world. That being said, I find some of the dialogues too long to read. It would be nice to shorten them.

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The plot of the story is interesting. How the main character might have an affair with a new person at a new place is pretty intense. But, somehow, I can see a few spelling and punctuation mistakes so it may need editing.

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