Midnight pRose

Looking to explore the depths of the ocean and discover what secrets lay within our universe without leaving the comfort of my couch. https://www.patreon.com/MidnightpRose

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Where do I start?

The concept is fantastic! It's simplistic and easy to understand, yet fresh and exciting!
The plot evolves at a peaceful rate. Each thought and emotion is clearly stated, in a way that conveys the idea that there's more to the story than what we're currently reading.
I'd love to see another chapter, however I think the story is complete just the way it is now.

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Well done!

The story flows and is written very well. I hope to see more chapters in the future! The choice of words and descriptive language is superb, the only critique I have is that the plot picked up a little slowly at first.

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