Milton Chan

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Romantic Thriller

I had an enjoyable time reading Hleo. The writing style and vivid descriptions truly filled the story with color and life. I was very impressed at how believable the characters in the story were. The character mannerisms, speech, actions all accurately reflected modern day high school students. The story had a good pace that built up the story suspencefully and grips you into a curious state of mind.

Hleo did acquire some flaws within it's greatness. I found some of the plot to be romantically cliche, and some of the plots dragged on more than it needed to despite the stories relatively good pacing.

Overall Hleo is a fantastic teen novel that should inspire your creativity with it's story. You will find the authors use of descriptive language to be a beautiful work of art.

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