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His Pomegranate Queen

This story is off to a magical start already! I loved this new take on this ancient Greek myth. The use of more modern words is a little surprising, given the time period in which this story takes place (although I don't blame you - the language at that time was even more archaic than Shakespeare; as if he wasn't cryptic enough!), and some of the grammar and spelling was a little off, but other than that, this story is amazing! I can't wait to get to know the mc better!

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The Last Shifter Alive

I must admit that the title of your story drew me right in. The summary was concise and to the point, and very intriguing. However, you could have gone over some more details at the beginning of the story. The language used is a tad bit childish, but that, put in perspective, gives us a clue of her age. BTW, I loved your little "author's note" at the end of Chapter 4 :). I love your plot (?) so far, keep up the good work!

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Five Words

I have not completely finished this book yet, but at the moment, the story is going great! I like how you develop the mc's character, and you get to know the characterization of Ace through his actions and how the he reacts to the mc, as he seems more closed off and cold. It seemed to be a little too descriptive with cookies at the start (but who's complaining?) and a little lacking in other, more important areas.
All in all, keep up the good work! Will continue reading this.

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Amazing Story!

Amazing plot-line so far! Makes me want to read more. I’m looking forward to how this story will play out!

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