mmadson

Colorado

Writer, Artist, Dreamer

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Loved It

I love love stories like this.. They are called "page turners. Great Characters, Great Plot. The author wove an interesting tale that kept me turning the page to find out more. A story, I'd sit and muse on the character Charlie. Interesting, mysterious and heartwarming. Found my self rooting for her along with those who helped her. What would it be like to be really different? To have Powers when you just want to be normal but the world you live in won't let you nor can you because you're too important though you may not know yet the extent. Great Story. Well Done.

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Fun Read

I'm about halfway through and found it's a fun read. Love the imagination! The fast pace, explosive action, cool toys (weapons, blades, ships, etc) & fun banter kept me reading. it's not the first story of heroes and evil doers but it's got it's own thing that I can see people loving it.

The only suggestion I can think of is the formatting could be tweaked.

And to give this story better justice change the blurb to be an excerpt on the story (instead explaining your writing style.) You don't need to explain upfront as I found the story was clear on who is who.

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