I'm enjoying the story. Good characters and pace. I personally like Orwellian themed stories such as this that make one think.Read the story now
I'm about halfway through and found it's a fun read. Love the imagination! The fast pace, explosive action, cool toys (weapons, blades, ships, etc) & fun banter kept me reading. it's not the first story of heroes and evil doers but it's got it's own thing that I can see people loving it.
The only suggestion I can think of is the formatting could be tweaked.
And to give this story better justice change the blurb to be an excerpt on the story (instead explaining your writing style.) You don't need to explain upfront as I found the story was clear on who is who.
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