Wildberry

Hradec Králové

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Clasical but very nice

This story is very nice. The shame is that in the beginning the author writes looong time about a bit boring details and the interesting ones are skipped in a blur. All finished with kinda rushed ending. It's like still not there, still not there and then ugh, finnished? However the author knows how to come up with an interesting plot and I believe her style will get better and better. Thank you for a good reading

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Very different

I must say I was pleasantly surprised with this book. The aproach of this author is very different. We all have our demons but we can just hope to be lucky enough to find love that helps curing it. Good work, please continue...

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Not for adults

No, I can't go further with this book. The MC is like 12yr old child and she can't be more boring. There is no storyline. Every interesting question is pushed to the background with her insecurities. And pee pee? Like really??? Sorry for being hard but this book is a trash.

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Very different

This story is very different from the other were stories. Selene is not a weak small girlie. She is fighting her way aganist all odds. Reacting like a human to the betrayal of her mate, hardening herself after the massacre she saw. Also her ruling future doesn't promise all flowers and rainbows. Still hope for her happy end and can't wait for the next chapter.

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Just why?

The story itself has such a big potential. The begining is meek but ok. Then the story starts to roll and it is ended with a weird ending and boooring epiloue. You had such a strong story on your hands so why? :-(

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I love this one

I enjoyed this story through and through. There is sex, the is supernatural but not lacking of humor. I envy the MC so much 😁 Please, please continue writing. Would love to read some other story from you.

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Interesting indeed

I just finished the fourth chapter and like the story very much. I love how descriptive you are when writing about nature and surroundings. It feels like I stand there being able to smell and touch everything. It is a great experience. There only a few situations where I think you are over describing. Like when she drinks the water in the morning after the attack. It felt a bit too much and my eyes were tending to skip it automatically. However, I think you did a great job so far and hope you will publish another chapter very soon. Can´t wait... Thank you :)

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