Alluring & Thought Provoking
First of all, I have to say: Wow, the image was outstanding and the message was clear. I have to give Marvy Virago my upmost, sincere applause because I thought I was going to read yet another collection of jumbled thoughts but no. Every line proved better than the last. I believe nature and life poetry has a chance to be renewed after I read this.
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Though I have noticed that some people would prefer if it were structured better and followed the rules of grammar but this is poetry. A creative writing teacher of mine once said, "When it comes to poetry, grammar goes out the window." I also believe such, some poetry and prose call for structure and grammatical accuracy, however, free-verse doesn't. Poetry doesn't even have to rhyme! As long as the message is clear then you need not worry about rhyme or grammar.
Too many authors have lost me in their attempt to seem professional and too few go unnoticed because of their simplification. This is one of those few and it was my pleasure to read. I do hope that the author continues to add more to "Zoi" as we all should.
Let's give a little love to this tiny blue-green ball floating around in space. It's the only home we have.