M.S. Farrell

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fantastic

This was an amazing fanfiction and reminded me a lot of one I wrote when I was first reading the series myself. I absolutely loved it. Hoping you write more and eventually maybe her blood parentage will be revealed.

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Love it

Absolutely adore the story itself. The writing is just a touch inconsistant, occasionally using bigger less common words that dont flow properly with the rest of the narrative voice but in later chapters that appears less. Definately could use some technical edditting, particularly in some places where spell check has replaced words that confuse what is being said. Overall I adore the story and its telling amd look forward to the next update.

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