mshelley

An aspiring writer with a terrible sleeping schedule 😭✋ I blame the wonderful writers and their equally wonderful stories on this app for keeping me up at night.

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VERY GOOD READ!!

I liked how the author made a very interesting story and the plot developed nicely. I was more interested to see how the characters were developed and interconnected to create a satisfying plot twist. A nice and short read!

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Wowowowow

Pretty good plot so far and im interested to see how they will get to know each other!!!!!

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Honestly such a great read. Hopefully there will be more?

If this is the end of the story, that would be fine by me. It leaves a lot for the reader to imagine. However, continuing the story and fleshing out the plot would be great. Hearing things from Gabriel’s POV would be nice. In terms of what’s already written, I am impressed. The writing, world building, and pace of the novel is great. It really had me on my toes and I could feel their chemistry. Definitely a fun read!

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Pls update ASAP and post all of your books pls!!

I really, really enjoy reading this story so far. Like, how will their relationship develop? What's so special about Lestat that caught the eye of that Witch? I am interested to see how it will end. The relationship between Claire and Lestat is very intriguing and the plot is so riveting that I can't put down this book!

To the author: thank you so much for these updates! Pls post more soon! And thank u for writing intermission chapters at the request of the readers, esp since this is a finished book. Also, just a suggestion on your formatting, you might want to italicize the personal thoughts the characters have so that its easier for the readers to differentiate the third-person narration and the individual thoughts of the characters.

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Super cute! Pls update!!

Omg please update this book! It really has me hooked. Very different than the other love stories and the main character is very likeable! I'm intrigued to see how this story plays out!!

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Dialogue is riveting! It's so good that I Need more chapters!

The inner/outer dialogue between the characters creates an awesome atmosphere and keeps the readers in suspense. I really enjoyed the way that the author wrote the budding romance between the two characters and it's honestly so good that I want more!!

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Very good book so far; more updates pls!

I really like the fact that the book leaves you wanting to know how Doe is going to react in a town where she's starting to suspect something's off. I give it 5/5 stars because it's very intriguing and the romance is okay. The only thing is that Ace's character is definitely flawed in the way that he's over-protective and obsessive over Doe to the point where it's like she has no freedom. But i feel like that just leaves room for a massive character arc/development for Ace. I am super excited to read more and kind of wish that there would be more updates so i dont forget the plot of the story 😭

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