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Racheal Marie
Everywhere, USA
I'm a pretty simple person with a very perverted and sometimes sick mind... Please do NOT ask for updates, I update when I get the chance and have the time.
Good but disappointing.
Would have given higher if it wasn't for the horrible ending. I hated the ending. I was loving it until then. Very disappointing.
Read the story nowHard to Read and Understand
Overall the story is alright, I only made it to Chapter 24 before I gave up trying to understand it, It's very hard to read.
You have no idea who is actually speaking or who's Perspective it is. Or anything really. Everything is I. Who is I? Who is speaking when? I have no idea it's too hard to follow.
The story itself is good but I won't give it a higher rating since it is hard to follow and keep everything straight.
I should be use for only the person of who's perspective is it coming from. But in this story you can't tell.
The Author doesn't say who is speaking really and the " " Are all over the place and never where they are supposed to be.
I'll change the rating and overall the review if the story gets a major clean up so it's easier to read and understand.
I'm sorry I really am but I'm only being honest. I can't get past Chapter 24 because it's giving me a headache trying to keep who is speaking straight and who's Perspective it's coming from.
Love the story hate the stupid waiting 6 hours to read the next chapter
I'd like it better if I didn't have to wait every 6 hours to read 1 chapter.
No offense but I personally hate those type of apps because it makes me annoyed when I get into a story but can't just keep reading.
I have to wait 6 hours before reading the next chapter and it ticks me off because I just want to keep reading.
Overall I like the story itself but HATE that it's going to take forever to even finish it.
Honestly I'm almost to the point of saying forget it and not finish it and delete the app because it's annoying.
Which in turn will make me want to change this review to a not so positive one.
Love it, needs editing though
I loved it. I had to find on amazon since it only has a the first few chapters here, Other then grammar and spelling it was great. Wish there could be a sequel I would love to see what happens later on with those 2. ^.^
I don't normally write reviews but I liked this one so much I had to.
