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Lusaka

I like to read the only thing I like more is writing

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Good job!

I just have a concern about how South Africa and Africa are being used. Africa is too broad and a five year old boy would never refer to an entire continent. I suggest a little more research could have gone into that section. South Africa is a big country so where exactly did Deacon land? Which airport. Remember you might have readers from there.
Other than that part of the book, I love your writing style, the plot is really interesting. Congratulations!!!

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Beautiful

Waiting to read more!

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Beautiful

Well done and interesting

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