Myles Anglesey

I am Myles Anglesey, a passionate writer. Although writing isn't a career I pursue in life, I love being able to write stories that people are willing to read.

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Excellent.

This story is great for one of your first works. The characters are very likable and unique; their personalities and looks are explained very well. The length of the chapters are just right, doesn't seem too short or too long at all; the plot is greatly enjoyable.

However, adding a lot more detail about the little important parts in your story will make it a lot better. The style of writing seems a little jumpy and should be slowed down just a little, that way, the plot will flow a lot smoother and easier to understand.

Overall, this story is honestly excellent and I am really enjoying it. I can't wait to read more.

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