I like it but...
I think the flow of the story is a bit rough. Some transitions are hard to keep up with and require attention to help the fluidity of Elliot and Celeste's webbed romantic en-devours, Currently, in my opinion the story reads slowly despite the fast flow of the plot. Speaking of the plot, It didn't really scream out when compared to some others I've read. Don't get me wrong, the plot is still solid, just probably in the low 30's of the 50+ werewolf novels I've come across. Needs a little more originality. The authors attempt on this writing style needs a little work, but it is an interesting style to play with. I love the character development, however I do feel it could have been a bit ... more. There were a few grammatical and punctual errors, but we're only human, right. Now I don't mean for this to hurt the authors feelings. Everyone has their preferences, this one just slipped a little under mine. Don't give up yet, It has potential. Hope this helped and best of luck with future revision and edits.
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