nadja losbohm

Berlin

#author of the #fantasy #novel Alaspis & the fantasy #romance series of #books The Huntress'. Loving music, movies, photography, travelling...

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beings that are different

"The Fae Factor" is a very interesting story about beings that are different and the fear of the standard man, a thing that’s common nowadays. I think it’s a good beginning to a wonderful fantasy book. You should definitely write more chapters. Would love to read what's happening next.

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emotional!

“Hearts of stone” is a really emotional poem. I could somehow relate to the plot, as our world is often very cruel and you do wonder do “ they all have hearts of stone”? Hope to read more of you. Keep it up!

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More please!

This is a very lovely short story with an unexpected ending. Or is it? To me, it would be very interesting to see what happens next, how Vera deals with her visions, does she get a mentor who helps her handle this gift? I'm curious to know, so keep it up, Tasha. :-)

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I'm blown away!

After reading this piece I’m at a loss for words. I cannot even say how much I love your story. My favorite part is the prologue. It’s just wonderful how you make Aaron tell the reader about his situation. Also, Gina’s and Aaron’s first encounter is fantastic and how she reacts. Next time I go to the movies I will think of ghosts in the cold cinema. ;-)
Overall, “Seeing Ghosts” is a great and enjoyable read, which leaves me thinking: What comes after death?

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impressive!

Though it is a very short story, it is full of emotions. "Ratio of Loss" makes you look at your problems in a different light. I wished there was more to read. Maybe worth considering? Well done, Dris, and thank you for this impressive story!

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