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Great start

Got the making of a great story with the plot so far.

Loved the intro- very engaging.

Immature - great start

Although there is only the first chapter I enjoyed it and it gave a good introduction to the characters. I like the fact it isn’t your ‘usual’ romance and look forward to getting to know the main character and how she progresses as the story goes on.

The writing is descriptive and flows well. I got a real feel for the characters. Like the couple she serves regularly, I took a real liking to them and the characters came to life as I was reading.

There are some minor grammar errors which a read over would fix - a couple of unclosed lines of speech and at one point she ‘walks’ over to Gary. Nothing that distracted me from the story itself though.

Overall a great start, I was looking for the next chapter and gutted when it only had the one, ha!

I hope you continue with the story and I will keep a look out for further chapters being uploaded.

Great read - very engaging and fab plot

The plot of this story is fab. I love the characters - even the bad guy!
There were grammar and misuse of words to be corrected but once that’s all done I think it will make for a great read.
I found the writing style very descriptive and could imagine the characters. I love that he really is a ‘baddy’ but seems to be softening around his new wife, I look forward to seeing this relationship develop.
I’m defo going to be watching out for the next chapters coming out.

Stoic

This book blew me away, I was captured from the first chapter. The authors writing style is descriptive and pulls you in.

I enjoyed reading the comments with the opinions and disputes around the content raised with its readers - a true sign of a good book!

I loved it and my kids did to as they got to stay up and hour later when I couldn’t put it down 😊

Loved this story

Beautifully written.
I loved this story - it kept my interest from the first chapter.

Can’t wait to read the next book 🤩

Great start

I found this initial chapter really interesting and mysterious.

I think the plot is great and it will make for an interesting story.

Great find

Thanks for this informative read. It’s written really well.

I set my tags up now #newtoinkitt

Loving it!

This story is very well written, it engaged me and I really felt like I was there with the characters.

I like both characters and look forward to seeing more of them together.

It only has 4 chapters at the minute but I will keep
Up with the updates and redo my review as I work
My way through 💖

Loved it!

Great short story.

I really enjoyed reading it and loved the characters.

Their love was evident and the writer did a fab job portraying this in a beautiful way.

Twister country

A good read if you’re into twisters, the descriptions are good and informative.

You get a feel for the urgency and speed they need to work at - it comes across well in this short story.

The Un-fairytale - brilliant!

I love where this story is going!

It’s so well written and the analogy with the dark chocolate- yeah i hate it but must admit I have eaten it when it’s the only thing in the house! Never quite hits the spot though.

The writing is so accurate and it reads like a book I would buy.

You got to keep writing this story it’s so unlike anything I have red recently 😊

Partners in arson

I enjoyed reading this story so far.

The chapters are short and interesting and it helped keep my attention.

I was initially confused around Ethans role for his sister but as the story progressed it all became more obvious so it definitely kept me reading to find out where it was going!

I thought it flowed well and the writing style was great.

Looking forward to keeping up with the next chapters!

Awkwardly yours

I really really liked these chapters and will defo be reading if more are put on.

I was laughing from the start and love the humour!

Keep writing....please!

Perfect 10

Loved reading these chapters. Really nice writing style and flows so well.
I love how strong Caitlin is and how sweet and down to earth Barry is, I think it will make for a very interesting relationship.
The making of a great story- looking forward to reading more!

Child of flowers - a great escape

I love the way this book pulls you into it and allows you to escape into the characters magical world.

The writing is descriptive and Flows very well so you really can imagine being in the world the author has created.

The chemistry between the characters is enjoyable to read and due to the good writing style I feel like I really know them.

Very well written, very enjoyable to read and looking forward to falling more into the magical world created.

What a great imagination!

The Project - A great read!

I am really enjoying this story so far. I liked hearing about Vances life before as that made me really engage and sympathise with the character which kept me reading on.

I am looking forward to seeing how he develops and am rooting for him to become a great soldier and perhaps the one to overthrow the 'project'.

I really like the character Dyaan too and can see a lot of things coming up for him - maybe a good friendship developing as they already seem similar in character.

The story is well written and this reflects in my emotional involvement with these characters.

Keep up the great work I cant wait to see where it goes.!

The king of the ruby crown

Great writer. Loved the story, left me wanting more. I will definitely be checking out more of your work.