Hey everyone, I'm a recent college graduate with a lot of long term projects from high school. I'm looking forward to getting better at writing, so give me all the feedback!

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I think the plot is very interesting, and the story itself definitely grabs at the reader's attention. I'm also really excited by supernatural stories, so that was another enjoyment for me. The most interesting piece about reading this was that the story is told in a first person narrative. (I just admire this aspect, because I find first person narratives are very challenging to write.) I definitely think this could be a really cool comic, or even a tv show!

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