Natasha Penn

AWESOME STORY!!!

Great book! It was a fantastic ride from beginning to end. I was instantly intrigued by the dynamic of the leading pair and their mutual disinterest in romance at the start. As teens, their initial miscommunications are honestly understandable and inevitably lead to drama, both the werewolf and normal human teen kind.
Plot was great and consistent, and the story flowed nicely even with the POV switches. Only 2 complaints: 1) more editing is needed, there were lots of spelling errors and incorrect words. 2) the grammar was confusing, I originally got the impression this was set in the U.S. but the slang used implied U.K., so I wasn't really sure what accents to imagine. This didn't detract from the story in a major way though.
I honestly loved this and I'm going to start the next book soon! Great work author!

Interesting But Needs Proofreading

I like the POV of the mate bond through a human with no experience of the werewolf world. The bond hits her harder, leading her to pursuing the very man trying to reject her. The flow of the story also isn't bad in my opinion, it's moving forward steadily and things are being revealed at a decent pace. The grammar and spelling could use work and sometimes there's punctuation where there shouldn't be, while other times sentences will go on for a bit without punctuation to break them up. I like that the MC isn't a saint, she was a thief out of necessity and steals even though she no longer needs to. She also has a tendency to act out, intentionally riling up the alpha and confronting those who come after her and her friend. Jill's the voice of reason that Eden needs but still manages to never listen to.