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Fine way to raise a voice for a change....

I like the theme and your non fictional writing. I agree with u.
Honestly, I didn't knew about all the sexuality type stuff. I built up a theory for my self as to people oppose these transgender and gay thing. It is human nature to oppose any change in environment or behavior , with that they are not comfortable, don't want that for themselves or are not accustomed to. It is like out of the ordinary thing for themselves so they call it abnormality.
So, I don't think their is such a word as 'abnormal' . I hate it. It just means that u don't have enough knowledge or something like this...Everything is normal in their own way.
I like your idea of raising a voice for a change. Thumbs up for this. I completely support you in this ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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I loved this book so much...

The plot is intense and interesting. Also, the vocabulary is rich and I don't find much grammar issues. I'm not a professional. The writing style is new and unique. Also, P.O.V's help so much to understand the story. I want to read more and find will Roland be a faithful person or will he betray Count? Will Count be able to get the love of Julia? Update soon.

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Amazing work

The story is well set and the characters seem so real. I like the vividness and track of the story. Theme is itself unique and interesting. I would love to read more.

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Love it...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ

Honestly, One thing I like the most is the vivid imagery. I love the way you describe the sces. It almost make it real. This is the thing most writers lake. Another thing, I love the suspense. The book has tendency to be one of the bests.
Do update soon. i would love to read on.

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Great poem!!

The theme of your poem is great. Having a unique and strong theme is the half accomplishment. You did great in that part. After that comes your writing style. Your's is unique. You just need to pay more attention in stanza balancing and correction in some typing mistakes. Otherwise the poem throughout is deep, sentimental and lovely. I do love the poem. I am quite surprised that it's your first attempt.. Most people don't have that. You do have a natural gift of poetry. Do polish it and cherish it. Do waste it.

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Love it....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š

The story is unique, easy going yet realistic. I would say the plot is just perfect. I really love Olivia. She is strong, and brave. She faces the life challenges better than any of us. I really do love the ending. I couldn't help crying. I recommend to all. Don't think just read and enjoy what the readers cherished. U won't regert it, I promise....

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Splendid work.....

Plot, being the main thing, you hit that part right. The story itself is interesting, unique and vivid. It feel so alive.... It's a great work, ignoring some punctuation mistakes. It sure did got me hooked up ..... ๐Ÿ˜ŠI can't wait to read more and find out what is Zaira going to do? I really wish she comes clean, as ti is really the right thing to do. Do update soon....
Thumbs up for your book...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Best story ever......

The plot is quite interesting and easy going. Your style reminds me of Lady Susan by Jane Austen . One of my favourite classic writers.. The unique romance idea adds just the beauty of the book. I so love it....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Love it....

I love the plot. Although, I don't like stories with sad endings but this one is definitely an exception. I do live the flow of the story and the chemistry between the main characters. I would live to see where this story goes. The story just reminds me of candy crush....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I got all hooked up and I can't wait for the next update. On first seeing the book cover, I thought it was something cliche. Then i read, and I would say it not something cliche to me but something close to reality. Honestly, I am a bit embarrased by the fact I judged the book by its cover. Well, the book is sure going to be one of my few favourites. Good job, by the way!
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๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

The book is a great symbol of hope for those who suffer in this world. It keeps you going and sentimental. I recommend this book to all who seek something to cry on. I couldn't help loving it due to its realistic and sentimental facts..... Overall, Its a lovely collection of poems..

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Soothing!

There is few poetry that leaves you calm and touched Your's is one of them. I like the way your poems goes and I do hope for more of your poems. I love to read them.

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Catchy!

From the beginning, it did grabbed my attention. Ignoring some grammatical mistakes, the story is great. The part of the case Blackwood is working on, needs to be a bit clear. Although, the formation of characters and theirs respective personalities is one thing your good at. Great collection of erotica and romance! I loved it

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Cuteness that never ends....

I loved this book from top to bottom. Though there are some itsy bitsy typing mistakes. Other than that the plot and story has a flow that some people lack. I would just say that I loved your innocent romance.

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Best Poems EVER!!!!

To start with the depressing thing, I agree this is strictly NOt for kids.

This poems are not depressing. Instead, fun to read. It made me feel alive. it helped me feel the pain and sentiments of the poet. Which, we honestly avoid as crying make us week. Guess what it doesn't! I t makes us ALIVE. So, I totally agree with the poet.
Also, I really appreciate the author giving the warning before first poem. It helps a lot. Also, if you're uncomfortable with READING SUICIDAL things then DON"T. But if u do love reading sad and realistic poetry, DO GIVE THIS BOOK A CHANCE!!! ANd I promise this will not leave u disappointed.

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Amazing poem...

The fluency of the poem is so smooth and natural. It is not forced rather it is written with a heart full of emotions. Even if the fluency and feelings are real and natural, it lack in the point of punctuations here and there. This aspect is the one you need to work on. I do hope everyone will like this poem.
After reading this poem I feel myself so full of sentiments . I just want to and give papa a bear hug. I want to read more poetry like this. I just give it a thumbs up.

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Friendzone

The storyline is no doubt amazing and interesting. The characters are seems alive and quite realistic. Although there needs some work to be done in P.O.Vs. I mean it seem more like a rough script rather than a detailed novel. A little more effort and your writing can be more interesting. It has a lot of potential though.
Personally, I like Alison's character better than Charlie's. She is stubborn and a fighter. SO is Charlie but I just prefer Alison better. The essence of vividness is more in Alison than Charlie.
Up till now, the story is smooth and interesting to read. I can't get it off my mind and I'm definitely hooked. Update soon . I will love to read more and get to know more.

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Love it...

I like the book. It is easy and quick to read along with interesting. Except for some typing errors the book seems a promising one. It has a lot of potential. Keep your good work! I can't wait to read more. Do update soon.

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I love Blair so much...

Enjoyed and loved the book so much!
Loved the book because of it realistic theme and story-line. I liked the ending so much! It is a great read and you will not regret it, ever.
The writer has a lot of potential to be a successful writer.

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I love it...

The plot is interesting and lovely. One of the things is that it's unique and bonds the reader's attention. The love the flow and the way it ends.

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Love it!!

I like the plot and story. It is intense and quite good in pacing. One doesn't get bored so easily. Apart from some typing mistakes, it's a great book. I would love to read more. please do update soon.

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Love it!!!

The plot is amazing! It really feels alive. I love Serenity. She is awesome.
Apart from some grammatical errors, the story is one big hit!!!
Love to read more...
Thumbs up for your book.

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๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ

I totally love it!!!! The plot is so awesome. I love Dee!! She is so sarcastic. The whole novel is like rollercoaster ride. It totally got me hooked. ..hehe. I love the chemistry between Madison and Chris. I love the ending. IT IS A PERFECT BOOK!!!!!

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Splendid!!!!

The plot is epic and really interesting. A little more descriptive in action in needed. Otherwise, the book is wholly a great work. I love Damien and his mysterious personality. The romance blooming is so touching....
Keep up the good work!!
Do update soon!!

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Love it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜

Overall, the story is quite great. The plot is unique, interesting and grabs one attention. A lot effort has been put into the story and turning the fables. I did love the book and the suspense is totally worth it. Do keep your good work on!!!!
Thumbs up for your story!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š

I really like how the story goes on. I do hope to read more. The plot is fascinating, unique and splendid. I really do hope layla and Aiden get together. I feel bad for Layla to. It's not her fault that she has green eyes.
Also, Aiden's family sucks. I really get chill when he tried to take his life. I really can't wait to read more of this story.....Do keep up your good work

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Fascinating....

The plot is intense, yet interesting. I already like the theme of of the story. Scars are the what make us, us and beauty lies in scars Like a rose comes with a thorn. I love Nana. She is the best mysterious lady. She keeps on smiling when she is not. She can't be with the one she loves. What she did to Iris and how did she used her? I will love to find out. This book really got me hooked up....๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜
I will love to read on and see what the ending is. It would make a great series if you want it to. It's your decision. And forming a series might turn it into more of an fantasy rather than a moral story. .....

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๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜.....

The plot of the story is quite interesting, descriptive, and in detail.. A bit of typing and few grammatical issues are there. Other than that, it is a great work and surely worth waiting for. I can't wait to read where this story goes. Also, I have never felt this scared. It might be the fact that I'm easily scared. I am guessing how will I sleep at night. I will have to jump in mama's bed, I think....lol.

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OMG.....

The plot is quite outstanding. I like the smooth, realistic flow and unique idea. Alongwith the way you explain the wheel of the life. It is a great book. I love it. Certainly, it is going to be in my favourites list.....

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๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜

The story is quite easy to go on. Plot is pretty interesting and I can't wait to read more. A little more of some tragedy would make the story more becoming. Why hadn't I seen it before??? It could be a great story one day. Just some touches here and there would make the story more interesting. Please update soon.

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Sweet....

The story might have some bumps in the first two chapters but I loved it. I was able to read it to the end and enjoyed it. The best character award goes to Sydney......lol. I love her. The book is sooo interesting. I wana read it again....

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Can't wait for more......

The story is lovely, cheesy and got suspense. It has great potentail. Although, the story goes smootghly till now. i suspect some storms. It would be great story after some little editing and typing mistakes. It got me hooked. i would love to read the rest of the story.

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Love it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐโคโค๐Ÿ’–

The story is overall great and got me hooked. It built the interest of the reader. The character of Cher is quite lovely and complex. Although, the ending got me tearing until i saw the second book.......It is childish and romantic yet never leaving the side of reality.

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I loved the book...

The story is interesting and keeps the interest of reader till the end. The twists and incredible idea of story line got me hooked t this book. I recommend it to all who see this review. If your having second thought, just read it. Don't think and i promise you won't regret. it.

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Heart touching poems.

Whenever i read your poetry i feel like i have dived within. i can't help myself feeling the exact emotions in the poem. Its so deep and emotional. One or two times i literally cried out my heart.

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Great!

Well, there is always two sides of a thing. Its up to you, on which side you look. Great poem and strong sense of capturing scene!

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True!

I like the way you express yourself fully regarding the harsh nature of human. The poem follows a unique sense of rhyming scheme. Apart from some grammatical and punctuation mistakes, it's quite great.

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Catchy....

The poem is great. In quest of being new in line, you managed properly to writ such a beautiful prose about smog. There are some grammar mistakes but thumbs up on your work,bro.....๐Ÿ‘

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Catchy!

Alex and Jonah seem so cute together. It's one of the cut romance type story and one can't help loving it. The plot is quite interesting and hold the suspense till end. Its a great blend of mystery, romance and horror.

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Love it!

The story reflects the true cultural environment of East. I really like your writing style. Some say that it lake some reality. I don't agree to that and I think otherwise. True love is hard to find. Who say, life is a bed of roses? Every relation has its ups and down. If someone asks your forgiveness , we forgive them. A women forgiving her husband's affair isn't a new thing. Sorry, I'm really getting of the point. Your book is great and i'll love to see u a famous writer one day.

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Interesting...

The book goes smoothly. The plot is excellent and unique. The romance between a dark queen and a innocent boy. I can't wait to read more....

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Innocent Love....

Maadhuri, the main character seems a dreamer while on the other hand her well to be ..... seems a bit cold and practical person. Up till now, this is all i can guess. Whatever, the story is good. The way you explain the wedding rituals is quite simple and easy to understand. I mean some some people write them so complex. One could hardly understand. Up till now, the theme is too practical and close to reality. I love realistic stories. And I hope you will update soon. I can't hold myself.......:)

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Sinister

The story is a bit bumpy and interesting. I mean its a lot to take in just a few chapter. then again it is your style of writing. This is like one of the legends. The main role Levy is a bit out of shape. Yes, past do change people. what you have explained about his parents, don't make a person that much bad. Unless he had the blood of someone on his hands. Overall, the plot is great and I do think that the true bad guy in this is Reign.The story is good and one would not be able to hold his hunger for more .:)..

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greatness found within

The poems are lovely and carry deep meanings. This make them interesting and thoughtful at the same time.

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Break the Rules!

I won't say that the plot lacks anything except some spices. I will just say that the central idea may not be new one but you seemed kind of a person who knows to play wit the words and plots to make it interesting..

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