𝙹𝚊𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝙷𝚊𝚜𝚔𝚎𝚕𝚕
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Hello, I am an aspiring author who writes any genre that I feel like writing (Thriller is my genre right now). Make sure to give feedback if you have any & follow me for more nerdtastic stories :)
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Ehh
This is not that bad, but some of the sentences aren't spaced out right or wrong use of punctuation. I like the characters and Alisha, but it seemed as if you rushed the character development. If you could improve your punctuation and add more depth to the story, then it would be a remarkable story!!
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This is amazing!
This short poem is quite amazing for many reasons. Not only is it relatable for many people, but it is deep. Keep doing what you're doing. 😁
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