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Slays!

From the beginning, book 2 grips you with its cinematography in words. He paints vividness. His style is biblical. I love how he incorporated "thou," "ye," "hath," "giveth" into the entire manuscript. Alicia's character is original and different. The hidden messages brings out the story. Dapharoah69 writes with passion. He is unlike anything I've ever seen.

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My admiration for your no holds bard creativity is greatly appreciated. Some authors beat around the bush and sugar coat their artistic talents,or abolish reality from each passage of the book. But not you KING, I take my hat off to you for not giving in, by allowing society to justify whom you are. Your book took me on a roller coaster ride of emotions, I laughed, I cried, I simply couldn't put it down. I could actually see a few fantasies of mine come to life, with each flip of a page. You are "my" definition of a true writer.

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