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Alpha Jasper

I am loving each story about the alphas and learning what they had to go through to find their loves. I am hoping I am reading the stories in the right order but it is also nice because you are able to read however you would like.

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Nice

This story was nice reading it was great to see the twist and turns that the plot took. It did take awhile to get through some chapters with how the writing went. This is a great start to a wonderful story that could go far.

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A Good Plot!

This story does have a strong plot line behind it but their is a lot of errors and the style of writing was hard to follow at times. I do enjoy where you are going with this story and hope to see more writing from you. I think the concept with the different species being able to mate between each other.

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Can't Stop!

This story I had to keep reading to know what happens. It didn't take me long to get the book done. I like the difference that this book brings into the mystical world of werewolves. I like the twist that it takes overall. Having a strong female as a lead is always a great read in my book..

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Alpha Grayson

The plot of the story did take awhile to keep a steady pace. It did hold my attention in wanting to know if they would be together and how it would play out in the end. I enjoy reading about each Alpha and how their stories come together.

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Capturing

This is a great continuation of all the Alpha's in this world. I loved getting to know more about Kaden and what makes him the way he is. It is perfect that his one true love is from the purity pack they are opposites but make each other whole. I couldn't stop reading this book and look forward to the rest.

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Changing the Story

What a great twist on a classic story. I can't wait to see how this story ends please continue with the next book soon I want to know if they can come together again!

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Alpha Landon

Loved reading this story. Kind of want to see how it would go in the future with the mystery girl and how things will be with Coen. Knowing that Landon's mate is out there and if he meets her does that change everything for Althea.

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The Hunter's Mate

Amazing plot and story line for the characters. There were a few grammar mistakes but overall you were able to get around them and still be able to read the story.

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Amazing Read!

I love the difference you gave with the mates in this story and showing the growing of Alison is a great plot line. Watching her become her own person and find her strength gives the power for any females reading this story.

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Worth the read!

I can't wait to see how this story ends. I hope you create another book or continue on with this one. It is killing me to not know where these characters will go. I am hoping for the ending I see but not sure how this could go. Great story overall grammar mistakes that need to be fixed.

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Amazing

I loved reading this book! I was hooked from the moment I started reading. It took me a day to read the whole thing but I didn't want to stop reading. The way the paragraphs were broken up made it at times hard to read and know what was going on. Other than that I loved the plot and the characters and looking forward to reading the sequel!

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A Must Read!

This story had me hooked the moment I started reading. I am hoping that there will be another book in the near future I don't want it to end the way it did. The writing just keeps you hooked that you just have to keep reading. I was up all night because I couldn't stop I had to see where this kept going. I hope to see the next story soon.

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Amazing!

This story was amazing. You are able to disappear to another world. I did see a few grammar mistakes but nothing that took away from the story. I can't wait to read the next book in this adventure. I was glad to see Avi and Gale together I could tell in the beginning that they might be the ones to end up together once they admitted their feelings for one another.

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Amazing!

This story really pulls you in. I want to read the next one and can't wait to see what happens. The plot is catching and makes you want to just keep reading. There was a few punctuation and grammar mistakes but they were minimal. Great job please release the next book quick.

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More than A Slave

This was an amazing story to read. The plot sucks you in and you just want to keep reading. I can't wait to read the second novel.

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Amazing!

This was such a wonderful story to get lost in. It brought you into middle earth and it was a unique way to look at things when it comes to death.

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amazing

I loved the story. I was able to get lost while reading this. I had to keep reading to find out what was going to happen. I really hope you write a sequel to this. I want to know if they come back to each other and how everything turns out.

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