Noctus and Sir Kippler

Sometimes sleeplessness countered by caffeine can cause ingenuity...

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Great Plot

The plot is great but the writing style does not capture its greatness

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Morpheus

The story is good for a light-hearted reading due to how heartwarming it is. I am sure I will update my review once the story is complete. So, Good Luck on writing.

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Great Story

The story is absolutely and completely immersive, you can not only understand the motives of the main character you feel empathetic towards them. Although I cannot seem to find a coherent plot, whether it is by design or not remains to be seen, but overall an excellent story.

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Everything is nothing with a twist....

While your grammar and spelling is somewhat bad, the story you convey does seem intriguing. I really do expect great things from this story... Although I am confused what the difference would be between a person who is a master of his own fate and a normal person. But yeah overall great story....

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A Somewhat Realistic Romance Story

Let me honest here, I hate romance stories with Mr.Perfect and Mrs.Perfect. But, here your characters seem to be flawed, which is how normal romances work. Overall I'd love to continue reading your story and see where Vanessa and Marcus go off to.

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Meh I really don't care for a title, but I mean whatever.

The story has a wide range of possibility, it can improve in the future, but I hope that you don't turn this into a detective story as it would be too common instead I hope you would make it like the character .blocks the memory and remembers it at that moment and from that point on against her mother's wishes (that is if she is alive at that point) investigates it but finds the trail old. My advice would be to put yourself in your character's shoes and go on from there although the things I've said are mere bits of advice, the greatest things about them is the fact that they are free, so take it or leave it, like I care.

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