Noctus

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Meh I really don't care for a title, but I mean whatever.

The story has a wide range of possibility, it can improve in the future, but I hope that you don't turn this into a detective story as it would be too common instead I hope you would make it like the character .blocks the memory and remembers it at that moment and from that point on against her mother's wishes (that is if she is alive at that point) investigates it but finds the trail old. My advice would be to put yourself in your character's shoes and go on from there although the things I've said are mere bits of advice, the greatest things about them is the fact that they are free, so take it or leave it, like I care.

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