Noemi Betancourt


Aspiring Puerto Rican romance novelist born/raised in NYC area living in FL with hubby and fur baby.

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I was completely mesmerized by this book! The characters, the interaction, the evolving of personalities was all fantastic. I love the melding and shifting of mythology being used and the love scenes were incredibly sexy. My only complaint, other than some missing and misspelled words throughout this piece is I'm a bit confused about when this might take place. I'm guessing it's some kind of steampunk alternate reality but it's not entirely clear.

In any case, I'm completely hooked and want to read more. I can't wait to read book 2 :)

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