Jenna Marie

Pittsburgh

(previously Nonfat_latte) Born in Couer d'alene Idaho, raised in Pittsburgh Pennsylvania, I love writing and drawing and am majoring in Cinema Production. My goal in life is to one day publish a book

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Overall Rating
Plot
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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Plot Kept Me Reading

The storyline is intriguing and different but the writing style is a little off putting. For a high school student she kind of talks like a child. First person is really difficult to write and for this story I'd recommend trying to write this story again in third person. Overall I only read it for the plot though the ending was a little disappointing.

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