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Untidy Land - A Children's Bedtime Story

Love the idea of a subject that almost every kid and his parents go through. Fun way to get an idea across to the child about cleaning up. Would like to see more senses involved in the untidy room - smells, how sticky the jam jar felt - maybe had trouble putting it down because it stuck to his hand. I could picture the scene very well and I think a child could also. Keep writing.

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