Noor

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I do write dark. I do!!! I really do okay!?

Anaïs Garnier - Cloclovilla

5 years ago

Hi! I need your help if you have some time 😊. I'm currently doing research on authors and readers from large platforms. It will only take you a minute. I'd really really appreciate it if you could answer my super quick survey. Here is the link (Please help me): https://forms.gle/WfimUmP9gCs5eHTc9

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dwolfe24

5 years ago

Please check out my books and let me know what you think of them! Thank you!

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Alexa Ailine

6 years ago

Hi, How are you?

I would like to ask if you could give my book a chance? I write a romance/fantasy/erotic book.

I will leave you with a taste below.

If you like it don’t forget to like, comment and review the book. I would love to have your feedback. Hope you like it. Xx

“Evil.”

′That voice...′ It hits me like an explosion, taking my breath away. My heart trumps urgently excited with the possibility that our wish will come true.

“Excuse me?” I ask out of breath.

“Answer to your question,” He gets up with a yellow-shimmer lotus clinging to his hand. “She protects herself from evil.”

"Emerald eyes,” The more he speaks, the more convinced I feel.

By letting himself be caressed by the moonlight, my suspicions are confirmed. My body involuntarily brings me to meet him.

I lose control over my mental faculties when I see him clearly. He wears a sophisticated black suit and shirt with the first few buttons open leaving his Adam peak and his neck base at ease.

His hair is combed back, letting it rest on his shoulders, his lips have a reddish hue so flashy and appetising that it looks... ′What is this?′ I look down at my right hand, and see the lotus roots wrapping around it.

“They are magic,” The smile in his voice attracts my attention. It is almost automatic to take my hand against his. “The yellow lotus represents mainly...” I dive into his irises that mirror the light received by the moonlight.

I feel myself blooming under his eyes, it is as if the green that bathes me has the power to see me for who I truly am. The person I locked up a long time ago. The person I have to protect from my future.

I feel his torrid and affectionate touch against mine, and I feel myself being enveloped in happiness. I feel the fear that I have controlled to be extinguished by being immersed in a splendid feeling of protection and love. I feel completely happy.

Happiness for my wish to see him again has been met.

Happiness for being in his presence and the calmness that brings me.

“Happiness,” I complete in a whisper feeling exactly that. I know everything about lotus. Its long and delicate petals dance in our hands in a slow and spontaneous rhythm. I swallow in an effort to clear my voice. “But this is magic. What...”

“Finds happiness,” I transfer my attention from the flower to him. “You are my happiness; otherwise, our hands wouldn’t be joined,” I try to move away, when I hear him utter my feelings. But the more I pull, the more the roots pulls me closer to him.

I close my eyes I shake my head in an attempt to regain some control.

“This isn’t right.” I try to convince myself of such, but since I left him that dawn that I can’t think about anything other than his touch.

His sumptuous and aromatic cologne blends perfectly with his natural essence delighting my senses. I open my eyes, focusing on his chest in an attempt to compose myself. The same moves wildly, revealing the effect I have on him.

“But the most important thing is that,” I feel him bend over my left ear and wrap my left waist with his hand taking my breath away once more. His fingers slides over the dress fabric until it rests at my base back. My soul rises, throwing me into a sea of temptation and affection. “I am your happiness,” His warmth invades my face in a caress, accelerating my heart and destroying my mind. With eyes closed I take a deep breath delighting in his rich manly smell while his touch lifts and tilts my head back. Time seems to stop when I open my eyes and find him so close to me. “Gods, you are so gorgeous! To compare any being with you would be reprehensible.”

“Emeralds,” I wrap my hand over his freshly shaved face, caressing under his eye with my thumb, emphasising my admiration, “so bright that I suspect they are capable of lighting up a city,” His face is so close to mine that for a second I wish he would kiss me, but he only places a chaste kiss on my forehead.

Lotus - The Fall https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/638865/chapters/2

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Jiya

6 years ago

Hey... Thank you for following me... I am writing a story named "DANGEROUS" and I'd really be happy if you check it out and leave a comment or review. Thanks again. Have a good night.

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Rainbow Dash

6 years ago

Hey!

I recently started a book, Foul Play, and I would really appreciate it if you checked it out! It's an Action Thriller.

Here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/637566

You can also check out another of my complete works, Silver Hair. It's a Romance Drama, Teen Fiction.

Here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/616932

Feel free to leave behind any comments or reviews, I'll highly appreciate that.

Stay Safe!

Bless you!💜💜💜

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TS Rose

6 years ago

We wondered if we could tempt you to read our novel, Psychic. It’s a mystery, a who-done-it, and a fantasy, written in the modern world of hate, terrorism, pain and trauma. It could be a true story. Well over 500 people have liked the tale, and it has 107 fantastic reviews from all over the world. For those who enjoy such things, there’s a delicious hidden romance too. This book is just as much for the male reader, because despite the main character being a woman, the co-hero is a 9-year old black boy from Africa, with a penchant for stealing things and the skills to succeed. We think you’ll enjoy it.

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FAT!MAH

6 years ago

Thank you so much for the follow noor 🖤

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Royal Council

6 years ago

Thank you SO much for the follow. Also, I love your pfp.

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Noor

6 years ago

Hi. Can someone help tell me why I can’t see my drafts after I’ve submitted the chapters?? I’m new here and really worried.

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Deleted User

6 years ago

Hi Noor!! Thanks for the follow! Where are u from?

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