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Unlike anything you have ever read! An experience in its own.

Here's the part where I have to calm down, this is a parody, and a fantasy that might feel kind of like an RPG game, and for anyone who's into anime this your fix. I do not want to fanboy too much on a review, but this is one of those stories you have to read even for the experience and the humor alone, this is an ongoing story, but I have faith in the author to finish strong, because all chapters have been consistently paced, and I mean never a dull moment, there will always be something that will make you laugh, no matter what your sense of humor is.

Yes it is humor, but there is a story, and a rather compelling one at that! It is parody, but it still has its own original feel. And speaking of feel, I rate a story, by how it made me feel. This does not go overboard with needless details, the author puts enough faith in our intellect and knowledge which makes the experience even better, not that there is a lack of detail anywhere, everything is, just right.

Characters are really well made, they aren't one dimensional, they feel real, Olga, Lyle, Chernobog, Boris, hell even Pud, the bear, oh man I loved that bear, and Dimitri, man, I feel that guy, I am that guy xD

Ok, so it will contain a few Russian words, swearing mostly, but not too much that you won't understand in context. It will get somewhat over the top sometimes, especially with the humor that sometimes you might get a bit distracted from the storyline, personally I don't mind that, I like that.

Conclusion: This is something you will remember for the outrageous concepts and humor involved. This is something written with a unique style. A lot of heart and thought was put into this, each chapter never fails to live up to the previous. If you like the prologue, you will like the rest of the story, Don't believe me? Give the first real chapter a go, you won't regret it!

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just read it, feels like real life, but not really which is good

It doesn't hold your hand, so it is best experienced when one already has a good idea of how real life works, especially if you're some kind of lost and confused teen on the outskirts of society and sanity,

Perhaps I have some biased to this mainly because this seems like something i would cook up myself, but author definitely has a signature here.

There are a lot of characters that just disappear and reappear in no particular order, we're not really sure if they even left the scene or not, but then again, i think this is the style author was going for, and i kinda like it, coz in real life, people really do just come and go, this was very refreshing, because it feels like something that might've happened or is happening, but presented in a way that still has the filter of magic that youth bestows, its kind of over the top, but not too much,

overall, it hands you a mixed bag of feelings, it lives up to its title, so yes it is in fast forward, then suddenly hits a stop at some point that seems to still be in the middle of something. It is a story that puts faith in the reader's own intelligence and creativity, while being kind of silly yet sad, painful yet inspiring at the same time, idk, i aint no expert fam, lol anyway, its not too long, go give it a read it just might be that quick fix you were looking for :3

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eyy, this was alright, give it a shot, you'll feel it and it's not too long.

Well, first off, I liked this, it tells a decent story that isn't too long at all, while still giving you something to mull over for awhile, it's sweet and sad, and altho this is isn't necessarily my go-to stuff, I was pleasantly surprised that it wasn't boring or shallow at all.
There's a a lot of emotion going on here, I can feel the writing, I can feel the self-awareness, but what I really liked about this was how the story was told, through the eyes of 'someone else' it gives you that feeling of being dissociated from whats going on, while still empathizing with the protagonist since it is told in first person.
Maybe I missed a few points or was reading just as fast as the author probably wrote this, I kinda thought the ending wasn't as strong as I hoped it would be, or maybe I was waiting for something that didn't come, kinda like our main character here, heh, regardless, it was nice, refreshing, got me to feel things and get a bit reflective.
there were a few typos and missing words I suppose, and few vague stuff here and there, but ultimately this was a short story I enjoyed, and I guess that's the important thing :3

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it kinda hits that spot yknow xD

I make a point to review a story by how it makes me feel, more so than what its really about most times, So if the topic hits home, I guess that's ok, but if the writing style is emotionally charged and isn't afraid to say things in a new way, while still carrying that intellect we need to even write, yea, man.

t's not too long, I like that, It doesn't pussyfoot around, I think there is some decent humor in here, while still a bit sad. I know there's a lot of room to improve on here, the story isn't done yet so, we can wait.

I suppose the *rolls eyes* kinda stuff could've been traditionally written, tho I understand that its part of the style, and it fits. Also I kinda feel like there should have been more said or more back story on some parts that were meant to incite heavy emotions, that or maybe I'm just kinda dead inside lol idk, humor is ok, I kinda like it,

overall why not give it a shot, not too long, kinda funny, unique style :3

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