Olivia

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Very Good!

I love the characters especially the main ones and I really like how you’ve written them not only in their personality but also how they interact with one another. They feel grounded and real and it makes the story so enjoyable to read.

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Not bad

I really like the plot of the book and the characterization of all the main characters, however, I’ve noticed that the dialogue is quite unnatural whether it just info dumping or telling vs. showing. I’ve also noticed that you use the dialogue tag “smile” very often and it comes off as very repetitive and awkward. I would suggest using “say” since it’s mostly invisible or in most cases taking away the dialogue tag to begin with.

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Wish There Was More

This was as amazing read. I read this whole book in one day. I would love for you to write more books and if you did, I'd be the first to read them. You are an amazing author. However, the only thing I would say you need to work on was your grammar. Other than that, this book was almost flawless.

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