Oluwayemisi Rose

Lagos, Nigeria

Love to read, write, and then read again.

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Very mysterious indeed

Though the writer missed a few punctuation errors, I loved the story and it was easy to flow with. Your writing style is very stimulating, but also simple. You captured my interest right from the beginning, I definitely cannot wait to read more.πŸ‘

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A great read

I completely love the story right from the beginning, I can see it's heading towards an interesting path. It pulls in the readers, makes them hungry for more, and definitely paints a clear picture of the story.
Well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Except, the writer needs to work n some grammatical errors. I recommend the Grammarly app, it works wonders for your story.

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Nice work

This is such a fascinating topic you've chosen to write on, its very thought-provoking and stimulates the emotions of others. Can't wait to read moreπŸ‘

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Great story

Your story is great, very engaging and it captures your attention if your a die-hard romantic like me. I love the up's and down's of the main characters relationship, the writer just need proper editing for a more polished work. 😊 Can't wait to read the rest of the story.

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Yes!

I absolutely love how captivating your prologue was and I haven't even read chapter 1 yet. Also, the way it hints at steamy scenes and a lot of intense drama definitely has my interest. Can't wait to read more.
P.S - Great cover photo

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Thrilled!

I'm so happy for the opportunity to compete like this, hopefully more competitions arise, giving new writers a chance.

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Just my luck

Just my luck is an interesting read with a lot of potentials, right from the beginning I was curious to know more about the story. But I believe the writer needs to give paragraphs for each dialogue to give her novel a more complete look.

Apart from that, there doesn't seem to be any other problems with the novel. Hoping to see how the writer carries on with her story, I'm very intrigued.

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Daddy's Girl

Though novels on Dom's and Sub's have never pulled my interest, I liked the story right from the start. You started right out of nowhere, creating curiosity and intrigue.

Though there were a few grammatical errors, those can easily be fixed. Well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.

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The Roommates

I honestly love what I've read so far, the leads just met but you can see chemistry there. The narrative is simple and quite eady to understand, can't wait to read the rest.

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The half light

A very delightful read. Your story is well pieced together, characters unique and shinning in their own light. I love the mystery the story fosters, I love how the main character isn't some damsel in distress. πŸ‘ on your writing, great work.

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Loved it.

This book is so interesting, I couldn't help but turn each page as I read on. Haven't finished it yet but I already love the story, can't wait to know more.

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Flower of Death

Your story is so intriguing and captivating. Completely different from other stories I've read before, which is why I love it more. The writer did a great job with piecing the characters thoughts together, the story is easy to understand and flow with. I'm intrigued with the introduction of the new character right from the beginning, I can tell there's more to him than meets the eye. Great jobπŸ‘

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I've been tamed!

I love your incredible story, I think you brought out your characters beautifully. Your style of writing is clear, easy to understand, and pretty captivating. Kudos to the writerπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Phenomenal



What drew me in right from the beginning with this story is the fact that I'd previously downloaded this same book on Wattpad but unfortunately lost the account before I could get past the first chapter.

The cover alone is eye-catching, editing done to perfection, and the story alluring. You pull your readers in with the first glimpse of vulnerability with the main character and I love that, I'm honestly glad I stumbled upon this novel once again and this time I'm determined to finish it.

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Intrigued

An interesting tale of romance, a story defying age limits. The story is pretty interesting and I feel for the young teenager with a crush that's unresponsive an shows no hope for the future, I'm intrigued to read more as the story grows.

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Captivating

A Restart is captivating right from the beginning, despite the grammatical errors I honestly love your story. It's got mystery, it's intriguing, you've written your plots in a way the pulls readers for more. Definitely can't wait to read the rest.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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I can't wait to read more!

You had my attention right from the beginning with your story, I literally felt shivers running down my spine while I read. Hope you upload more, cause I sure as hell can't wait for the rest.

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Dishevelment!

Claryssa's struggle with being a mother definitely opens the mind to the struggles a working mum faces, in the dark times of society. I'm no mother, in fact I'm still in my 20s and have no understanding of the struggle she faces, but I empathise with her. That's how great this book is.

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I feel like the curious cat!

Your language and writing style is pretty simple and easy to understand, and your descriptions paints a clear picture in my mind. I love the sophisticated air of your characters, and I'm intrigued to find out more about the story even though I'm not done reading.

Only, you missed a few punctuation marks. Try to use Grammarly app, a writer recently introduced it to me and my writing has gotten better.

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Wow, Wow, Wow!

I only read one chapter, but I can't wait to read more. Your writing style definitely intrigues the mind and makes your readers want to know more. Seeing your work definitely motivates me to do better, thanks a lot for the opportunity to review your book.

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β™₯️ Ur book. I couldn't get enough

Love your work, hope to see more of it. Definitely an inspiration to me as a new writer😁

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Love it, I'm excited to read the rest!

Check this book out!

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