omnivanilla

greetings :3 I am omnivanilla, and I write garbage books. she/her🏳️‍🌈

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Okay, so, this book consisted of some pretty serious topics. Thankfully, you captured Chloe’s emotions extremely well! However, I believe Alex and his friend’s sudden realisation of ‘Oh, whOops, I didn’t know we were hurting her feelings with weapons’ came over too fast? Like, they should be gradually come to that conclusion? Either way, it was a quick read and not too bad! I also saw that you wrote thus when you were 12, which is majorly impressive because I, pretty sure at 12 I wrote a story about, like, the most cliched stuff ever? Anyways, thus is pretty cool :3

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Hi! I stumbled across this book on your page and thought it was pretty cool! I know it’s only the first chapter but I’m excited to see where you take this. Keep going, I already like the vibe given at the start🌈

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