paba77

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Such a good story and characters

I love this story. And how the characters are growing and evolving. I'm impressed with weaving it with the other stories in the universe. And balance of character and story with spice. Highly recommend.

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Lovely and engaging

I great story and engaging. I enjoyed the adventure

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I say she doesn't use the safe word. It seems it would break the rules of this world. I trust you. And if you feel there are two more books I am in. Thank you for creating this world

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Love it

I love these characters and how they evolve. The mix of spice and story is perfect. I love the worlds you build. I love forward to every Sunday.

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Amazing and engaging

Such a good story. The characters evolve on time and not predictable. I wait for each new chapter. One of the best stories I am reading. Highly recommend.

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Great mix of story and steamy

I like the slow reveal of back story for the characters. As they grow and become more dimension. And vulnerability of the alpha characters. Really enjoying this book.

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Engaging to the end

It is a great ride and wonderful character development. I highly recommend getting the full story.

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Quick read that hits all the marks

Impressed with the quick character development and investment. Engaging story that moves at a fast pace with sex scenes that are intense and relevant to the story.

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Balance of brutal and story

It has extreme brutal scenes however not gratuitous it is woven into the story. It is an engaging story where love isn't soft or steady put persistent.

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Story and spice

If looking for storytelling with spice constantly woven in.

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