patrick

Cork , Ireland

Budding Author writing about sociopaths.

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Las Vegas Saviour

The first 11 chapters are long prelude to the story which could be condensed a little bit. Whilst we as readers get a background to Emily in terms of her life history, she seems to be portrayed only in the most superficial way only. You have no real idea what way she looks, or how she thinks. Maybe a bit more character development is worthwhile. All in all a easy to read style though, and almost no grammar errors at all I could spot.

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A short dark tale of possession

This went from zero to hero really quick, being a short story it had to. Something tells me the author could write a lot more around this if they wanted to. There were a few minor grammar issues with tenses, but the story flowed and paced well, and was very creepy!

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