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I'm an aspiring amateur writer on Inkitt. Please check out my work .If you can fantasize you have the ability to create a new world.

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I love the details.. to be honest I'm not one for historical fiction but this is precise and engaging. There's not too many confusing figures it keeps me captivated. It's like watching a series of some sort, chapter by chapter. I read up to the fourth and I must say you've got good diction and eye-catching use of words. .. I will keep commenting it's good.

It is one of Inkitt's superb works written by a well versed author.. I have fallen in love with her wording. As an amateur writer, I will have to learn from her if I'd like to be as good as she is. This is my frank opinion

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