Regalgoth

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Awesome

Ok so when i first read the story i thought of this movie called escape room but then your story has a unique plot.You first gave the background of the characters so that we would understand as to why they would enter such a dangerous game.This is an amazing story and the friendship between the characters is so heartwarming.And then there is the issue of cultural backgrounds just woow that totally got me.Its such beautiful yet sad story i dont even know how to feel and i just love it.It also shows that you really did your research on certain locations of your story which makes it even more interesting.

Love It!❤️

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Lotus,The Fall

Woooow talk about a beautiful story!The flow,Grammar and storyline everything is on point.I honestly cant wait for the next update.You have a way with words that makes a reader so curious about what's gonna happen.Good job!

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The quest.A tale of vengeance.

I would like to start by saying that you are a good writer.You really got my attention by the way you described how he murdered them.Its a sad story which is told beautifully.I haven't finished the novel yet but trust i'm not a fan of the church.

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Slave

You have a great, great storyline. I didn't give you five stars because I feel like you could do a lot when it comes to grammar and punctuation. Overall you deserve five stars and you have a way of creating cool suspense.

Looking forward to your next update!

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The unborn Joel

First I would like to say your story has all the interesting components. Mystery, weird romance(which I seriously love) and suspense. I really loved it and I found myself flipping the pages one after the other. I won't point out the grammatical mistakes but when you edit it please tell me. I would like to reread it again.

Great storyline!

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Interesting

I loved this novel and the relationship between the characters was created beautifully. Also the chapters are so short which makes it that interesting to read and the flow of the story is amazing. I would just encourage the author to keep writing. Just edit a few grammatical errors and you good to go.

Well done!!!!

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Woooooow interesting:-)

This story is so damn interesting.I cant wait for your next update and its got an interesting plot.Excellent work author

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